Tuesday 20 March 2012

We wrote our own version of The Very Hungry Caterpillar.

The Very Hungry Caterpillars

By the Super K -9s
Illustrations and story based on the story by Eric Carle.



 In the light of the moon
some little eggs lay on a leaf.


 One Sunday morning the warm sun came up and – pop!- out of the eggs came  tiny and very hungry caterpillars.
 They started to look for some food.


On Monday they ate through one apple, but they were still hungry.



On Tuesday they ate through two pears, but they were still hungry.



 On Wednesday they ate through three plums, but they were still hungry.




 On Thursday they ate through four strawberries,
but they were still hungry.

 On Friday they ate through five oranges, but they were still hungry.



On Saturday they ate through
one packet of popcorn, a banana, some meat loaf, chippies, an iceblock, some liquorice...



 ...peanuts,a chocolate ice cream, a lollipop, 
 a piece of chocolate cake and some jellybeans .





 That night they had tummy aches!



 The next day was Sunday again.
The caterpillars ate through one nice green leaf, 
and after that they felt much better.

Now they weren’t hungry anymore-
and they weren’t little caterpillars any more.


They were big, fat caterpillars.





They built a small house, called a cocoon, around themselves. 

They stayed inside for more than two weeks. 

Then they nibbled a hole in the cocoon, pushed their way out and  …





 They were beautiful butterflies!






7 comments:

  1. I love your Hungry Caterpillar story Super K-9s. What clever writers you are. And those caterpillars look very hungry. Well done. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

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  2. Wow, room 9 I love the way how you did it all by themselves. (Teodoro)

    Well done! (Charlotte)

    Well done cool K9's. (Emma C.)

    I like the way that you made all the things that the caterpillars ate. (Dom)

    Wow room 9 I like the caterpillars you made. (Inara)

    I am so impressed that you made a butterfly! (Biddy)

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  3. Great job... the colors and shapes look great, love your creativity!!!

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  4. Great job... shapes and colors are great, love your creativity!!

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  5. I love everyone's work because they have done very good work and they have done quality work.

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  6. I love everyone's work because they have done very good work and they have done quality work.

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  7. beautiful ilustrations, you're amazing!!!

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